Ars Poetica
A Found Poem
Whenever I caught him down in the stall, I'd approach.
At first he jumped up the instant he heard me slide
the bolt. Then I could get the door open while
he stayed laying down, and I'd go in on my hands
and knees and crawl over to him so that
I wouldn't appear so threatening. It took
six or eight months before I could simply walk in
and sit with him, but I needed that kind of trust.
I kept him on a long rein to encourage him
to stretch out his neck and back. I danced with him
over ten or fifteen acres of fields with a lot
of flowing from one transition to another.
What I've learned is how to take the indirect route.
That final day I felt I could have cut
the bridle off, he went so well on his own.
Without a title, readers would never know that this poem is
actually about poetry. I, along with all horse lovers, would see this poem as
being about what horses can teach us.
The poem essentially uses a horse as a metaphor for poetry.
It begins with a horse being down in a stall, which tends to symbolize that
some injury has occurred. It is entirely plausible that this can be linked with
the failed attempt at a good, praise-worthy poem. If your work isn't applauded
by others, your pride and motivation can be wounded. The time frame of
"six or eight months" can express how much time it can take to earn
trust, but moreover, it can display how difficult it is to get a poem just right.
Writing poetry isn't easy, and to write one that gains approval from all is
even more difficult. Here, the speaker is taking the time to earn the trust
back from readers so that she trusts herself and her abilities to write poetry.
Because every day spent with horses is a roller coaster of
emotions and new challenges, the enjambments that occur repeatedly force us to
ride with the poem. In the second stanza of the poem, we are with the speaker
as they ride the horse across fields. We are experiencing the journey with
them, and poetry has us experience the journey with the author.
Horses are always teaching us something new, and we are
taken on a journey with them every time. Poetry is a learning experience, which
is why the horse is an exemplary metaphor for it.
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